groups

what are some things you'd like to get out of writting more collaboratively with peers? well for me i want to be able to write at the top of my heard without getting writters block. And hopefully being around other people they may have different tecniques on how write more efficiently.

What are somethings you's be willing to contribute to a writting group?i could work on taking my time and reading my work over and others.Another is, if someone needs help i can help them and give them corrections. not to forget, the blogs i will comment them and give my peers feed back that will be useful to them. And for any traditional help that they need i will be happy enough and willing to help them.

Is it more important to work with people that have the same topic as you? or your friends? i think that working with your friends is more important because it wont be awakward, and your can really say what you want about their writting. but as far as the same topic goes, people feel more pressure because someones work may be better or they may point out better ideas about that topic then you do...

What are some rules for the groups? well some rules should be; keep the socializing down, and make sure everyone helps out everyone

REiCK000

My dogie reicko is a rottweiler. yea, he's a beast as you can see. But there is more to him then a mean looking face. really deep deep deep down he is a freakin baby! he sits on my lap all the time to protect me and cries alot. But on the flip side, he can be a bit of a pest! he grawls all the time and NEVER shuts up! you think hes going to bite you but really hes just talking to you in his own language.




Pretty much he is a ladies man!! he loves them amp;s">b!@#$&s! one of his favorites is a golden brown lab named Maddie! if someone mentions her name his tail rises and he begins to cry, then runs to the window and looks for her.the other booty call is a labadoodle (poodle/lab) named Pepper, she doesnt looks that good but i guess looks arnt everything. l0l.

i could just remember when we first got him. his body was very small but his head and paws were so HUGE! he was a funny one might i add. very calm,but at times a wild banana! there was this one time where my mom was mopping and i was playing with him and he ran into the kitchen and flew into the laundry room. i went to go and look for him and he hit his head on the door! omg! it was the funniest thing ever! and just looking at the look on his face was hilarious! he looked as if he had no idea what happened! awwww...pooor poooorrr dog! i will never for get that day

we taught him how to shut the doors and to sit pretty. (which is when he sits up on his but) also he knows how to give us left and right paw.

But for now he is still a clauts. falls down the stairs hits his head on the edge of the tables and even talks in his own language. he's really one of a kind!

technology

The other day there was a quick write about different technology, and how people get attached to them, or even rely on them as well. For i feel like everyone should have a cellphone. You never know if there is going to be an emergency. Like for instance, say if you have just gotten into a car accident or some weirdo is trying to talk you into getting in his car? what do you do with no phone? Scream? People don't always respond to someone yelling "RAPE" "RAPE". So to me...that is a major necessity. i mean i guess you can say that texting isn't so important... but if you really think about it...it does come in . what is someone has you and you can not call anyone because you'll be too loud..so in that case you would text someone asking for help...correct??

Another, i pods and mp3's and walk mens or whatever it is that you listen too is basically there for some entertainment. if your walking by yourself and really bored then just put the earphones in and start listening. For some people music calms them down. so if there is someone with anger problems then there is an easy solution for them. each type of music is completely different. there is poetry type and yelling and even soft mellow. so there for in my own personal opinion, these are really important items. so as the technology goes on to bigger and better ideas then these items wont be as important because no one will want an old boring i pod!

The War

Once found out that Obama was going to send 30,000 more troops to Irag, I found that he was contradicting himself by far! i think that people mainly voted for him because of the fact that he wasn't for the war. i understand that its not easy to just end the war....but that doesn't mean to send over wayyy more troops then he should. Why doesn't he try to make peace with them??? make a treatie or something.

If i had a kid that was in the war, i would be very scared and having Obama be the president that didnt want the war, i would have totally voted for him. And now i would REGRET it horribly. how doesnt he feel bad? going back on his word, and sending people to diee...when some of those people dont even want to be in the war to begin with. i hope that he feels bad because from all the heart ache that others will go through. He wouldn't like it if his kid was going to the war.

Barak Obama is known to the historical..because he's the first black president, but why doesnt he be known for the brilliant man that stopped such a long war. We are hurting innocent people. no one would like it here if afganastan or irag came over here and killed a bunch of people for no reason and sended more people over.

I just hope that he really regrets what his desison is. Because he is going to have to live with it!!

WHY CANT I JUST BE PRESIDENT!!! lOl

The New and Improved President

It is now 2012 and i am the NEW PRESIDENT... For me it wasn't that hard to become president. Everyone likes me! what makes me different from all of the other bimbo's is that i really want to work with the citizens of America. YEA YEA... thats what all the other presidents say but really in my heart i feel like that is a bunch of bull s*!% .i allow people to write me letters with proposals on how i can help America and i take it into consideration. they want some free health care.. i will work on it. they want less poverty i will work on lowering prices and increasing homeless shelters for those in desperate need. Its not easy having a baby with a job and a house.
Why cant we just have some peace with all the countries that we are in war with? i just seen it as.... we are in war for a specific reason and now we have a bunch of random reason's. i don't want to hurt other people in different countries... i don't want to break their homes. that's mean man!!! we need more niceness in this world and maybe people will want to change for the better. Another thing... when i hear people on the t.v and news talk about all this political talk i honestly CAN NOT understand a word that is coming out of their mouth..why use big words??? to sound smarter??? well i think that they are beating around the bush. they should just come out and say what they need to say. if its a yes or no answer just say YES or NO... i don't want to hear a paragraph.!
So once we become united.. There is no need to thank me.. i'm just doing my job!

Sincerely,
Ms. President

writing

Looking back and reflecting on my writting, i really dont see a difference. ofen times i tend to repete things. But im still working on that. for me, personally, i like blogging because i feel like it will eventually help me become a better writter, and help with vocabulay
Normally when i write essays, i generally do good, but i get the same feedback.which is " look over writing and proof read."if a teacher assigns and essay i just want to get it done. so i do it as fast as i can and rush it. for some reason i hate looking over my work. I find it very boring and i think that there is nothing wrong with it. i know that i shouldnt do this but i cant help myself. Maybe it is because of the fact that i dont like to read in general. So if i do happen to read it over i do it to fast and i dont find any mistakes. thats what makes me irratated. Once i get my paper back and i see that it makes me think that all i really had to do was just read it over and take some time. But i NEVER do.
Therefore, i now plan on revising my writting the to the best of my ability. I am a junior now, so i need to get the hang of it. Coming senior year i will ACCOMPLISH my goal of writting to perfection. Just you watch.....

The Future

Once I graduate from high school, I plan on going to Everest, a Career collage and becoming a Medical Assistant. its weird how much my mind has changed from freshman year until now.

In the beginning of the freshman year I remembered I just wanted to be a fashion designer and make my own styles. I've always dreamed of how nice it would be to own my own store and to wear whatever I make. I thought of a colorful and dressy but not to dressy clothing line. fun and spunky but not punky! Sometimes I used to draw out sketches of outfits that i would like to have made, and accessories I would like to have on them. By the middle of sophomore year, I realized how hard it was going to be to make all the clothes and open up a store. I started thinking realistically, how am i going to get all the money to open a store? will i be accepted for a licenses? are people going to buy my product? so that's why i now have figured out a good plan that wont have me thinking any doubts.

This year, being my junior year in high school, i want to just go to a career collage and become a medical assistant. The reason why i say "career collage" is because, i guess you can say i had a little to much fun in my other years at AHS. the training is only 8 months and i would love to work with little kids.then, from there, i could get some experience and maybe just maybe work as a nurse or a doctor. So from here on out, i Need to work my buns off and try my hardest because not everything comes easy in life, especially when your grades are low.